The suffrage movement of the progressive era was historic.The term historic historic is appropriate because it showed is the history of women’s voting process and they were discriminated against.After analyzing the documents, culture and politics are the themes one should consider looking at when discussing this topic.
firstly in document 1,women wanted change.For instance in line 10-11,”women was convincing state government to grant women’s right to vote.This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them.In addition, women were being force to do what men told them to do or what men felt like what was right. this allows us to see how women were discriminated against.
secondly in document 1,2, and 3, rules and laws during that time hurted women’s relationships, took power, and changed the structure.For Instance ,in line 7-8,”The debate over the women’s right to vote had split the movement up into to groups.This allows us to see how the women had disagreements and how it led into separation.moreover, politics was trying to take women’s power.for instance, in line 13″ Rose Winslow and several other women were arrested for picketing.” This shows us how politics took was trying to take women’s power for not letting them protest.
In conclusion, culture, political, and relationships affected the women society during the 1800’s and 1900’s.Due to these themes,it was difficult for women to get things done their way.This shows us that women are strong fighters and has been through obstacles to get their rights.what i mean by obstacles is that women have gone to jail and was constantly denied but they still somehow finished Strong. perhaps, people in modern day should speak up and fight for what they want.
WONDERFUL JOB ! For instance in line 10-11,”women was convincing state government to grrant1 women’s right to vote. I scored it a 3 first , i like how you gave mostly the direct information they were looking for . you gave good information of why women were not able to vote.
Great job! I focused on the sentence “This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them.In addition, women were being force to do what men told them to do or what men felt like what was right.” I gave you a 3 because you went straight to the point. It was clear what you were trying to get across. I could see that you were focused of the theme politics in this. Do you think that the women ever gave up fighting for their rights?
Great work! I focused on the sentence ” .This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them”. I scored it a 3 because you explained what the women did when they didn’t want to give up and when you said For instance in line 10-11,”women was convincing state government to grant women’s right to vote. What happened to the women when they got the right to vote?
Nice Job ! In line 10-11,”women was convincing state government to women’s right to vote. I scored it a 3 first , i like how you gave mostly the direct information.I suggest in the future, you connect sentences to your adjective better . And I sense you’re focusing on culture for theme . However , I didn’t see your overall adjective .
You are a star for-real. I give you a 3. This was outstanding. Great explanations. I learned a lot from this essay. ”This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them.In addition, women were being force to do what men told them to do or what men felt like what was right. this allows us to see how women were discriminated against.” This was an great this allows us to see sentence longest I’ve see. Great job! Keep working hard!
Nice work your work is great too me.” In conclusion, culture, political, and relationships affected the women society during the 1800’s and 1900’s.Due to these themes,it was difficult for women to get things done their way.This shows us that women are strong fighters and has been through obstacles to get their rights.what i mean by obstacles is that women have gone to jail and was constantly denied but they still somehow finished Strong. perhaps, people in modern day should speak up and fight for what they want.” i love how your conclusion is.
First off good job on the paragraphs and the direct information were looking for. This allows us to see how the women had disagreements and how it led into separation.
GREAT JOB. your this allows us to see sentence is great. This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them. this allows me to see that women really wanted to get their rights and it also shows me that they needed the government help to get what they needed. nice post i gave u a 3 so keep it up 🙂
Good job ! I focused on your “This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them”. I scored it at a 2 . You got some of your details wrong . In the future maybe you should read the evidence twice to further more understand the concept “. Do you think women were to aggressive ?
Great job! I really loved how you explained your evidence and how it connected back to your initial claim. I rate your work a 3, because I appreciate the “short” and “sweet” appeal of it. I could also tell that it was politics-oriented due to how explicit your statements were. My only suggestion would be to make sure you put quotation marks before AND AFTER your evidence, like when you said, “For instance in line 10-11,’women was convincing state government to grant women’s right to vote,” which should’ve been closed off. Other than that rather minor problem, definitely continue your work to the same caliber and beyond! Do you believe that women still have that same drive, or “strength,” in the present in comparison to the past.
Wonderful work! I focused more on the sentence, “This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them.” Although you forgot to close your quotations you did a great job explaining your quote and getting straight to the point on what this helps the readers understand . Next time just be mindful with periods and quotation marks. Lastly, Did the women put up a great fight? If so how do you know & what did that do?
Great Job!! “This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them.” I rate as a 2 because you have didn’t have capitalization. This post made me feel like you understand why they want their rights. In the future look back at your capitalization. What will happen if they didn’t split up into twos?
Good job! I like that you included your “this allows us to see” sentences. I give you a 2 because in your paragraphs it looks as if your in a rush. Take your time to make sure your correct the simple things. I like how you included evidence. You also should make sure all of your sentences are clear to read. Why do you think the women kept fighting even though they where getting thrown in jail?
Excellent Job. I see were it would be your, This allows us to see, “In these lines, it tells how women were trying to earn the power to vote even before the Progressive Era.” When I read this you made me feel that you really know what you talking about and I agreed with you. What you should do in the future is do what you are doing now. Why did you choose historical?
Great Work !!!! I Gave You A 3 . I Forcused On Sentence ” This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them ” . This Is A Very Strong This Allows Us To See Sentence . You Gave Lots Of Information On Why You Say And Explain It.You Gave Me A Better Understanding.
good work! i scored a you a 3 on the this allows us to see.This allow us to see that women didn’t give up on trying to get the government to work with them ” .this is a good this allows us to see sentence its on topic not all over the place. your essay is well put together and very interesting. what made you feel like this?